User talk:AnaFlorescu/Bi4I4

Framing of the article
This lead of this article feels more like it's written for a review paper than for a Wikipedia page. The subsection on "Topological Insulators and the Relationship to Solid-State Chemistry would serve better as a part of the lead as it contextualizes the article. On the other hand, there's some wording in the article that feels a bit too casual (e.g., "thanks to", "massive", and "caught attention of"). Overall, the explanations are well done and the research seems thorough. Purely for visuals, I think that some of the horizontally long figures can be centered instead of right justified. Lipidmonolayer1 (talk) 18:46, 14 December 2023 (UTC)