User talk:Anagalicmaster

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Self-knowledge (psychology)
Hi and thanks for taking an interest in this article. I have reverted your recent changes but I will explain here why I did so and how you can make a lasting improvement to the article.
 * 1) "from the course Know Thyself, by prof. Mitchell Green, University of Edinburg..." isn't a suitable source. Sources on Wikipedia have to be things that have been published, like a textbook or a research paper, not an event that you personally experienced. Since you are talking about what Freud thought, can you find the relevant paragraph that Freud wrote and cite that? Or a published scholarly book explaining Freud's ideas? You can use the Cite button to put in a full citation to a book or article.
 * 2) "about our selves form the extrospection, since we are usually hiding things we are ashamed to admit in public" Wikipedia articles don't use "we" or "or" - what is called second-person language. If you are making a point about people, then just say "people". Different publishers have different style guides and this is a style point that applies on Wikipedia.
 * 3) "it is better to investigate humane nature about our selves form the extrospection" I think I see what you're getting at, but I couldn't make sense of this as it is written. Shouldn't it be "human nature" and shouldn't it be "from extrospection" rather than "form"? Even with those changes, I'm not sure: are you saying that (Freud taught that) a person's nature is revealed more by extrospection than by introspection?

I hope that you're not discouraged and that you have another go at sharing what you are learning about the interesting topic of self-knowledge. MartinPoulter (talk) 13:28, 7 August 2022 (UTC)