User talk:Anastasia.Shylnov/Pornography addiction

I am reviewing Anastasia.Shylnov's wiki page about porn addiction/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pornography_addiction

While reading I can see that the page has been updated a good bit. The information that was present before the change was minimal at best, but now it seems like there is more detailed information about porn addiction. they have included a brief summary of what porn addiction is ana sort of abstract to the rest of the page. It's not too much but it seems a bit drawn out at times.

For the content, it was detailed, but again, I personally feel like some parts are overexplained and can be simplified in its explanation, like with the section about diagnostic status. None of the claims seemed biased and they look back up to me.

I was going through the sources and they seem to be in order. Reading through the sections and gong back to the references I saw that they were supported to what they were talking about. all of the links work, and some went to websites and others went to books and articles dealing woth the subject.

Overall, I didn't see any pictures on this page, but I also know how hard it is to post pictures on here so I understand.

Overall I loved the article and the information that was added to it. It was a refreshing read and I see that it has a lot of people interested. Some of the strengths are that the info that was provided was really informative, but it was sometimes really long and drawn out. I did love the article as a whole. I would say that this article is well thought out.

MoetDaPoet (talk) 01:34, 15 November 2019 (UTC) Mohamed Konneh Jr.