User talk:Anastasia.Shylnov/sandbox

Whenever you have solid content put in your sandbox or to the live page just tag me so that I get a notification. Otherwise, it looks like all your stuff got knocked out because of copyright violations. Best of luck! Amilon3 (talk) 04:52, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

Hi, go ahead and proceed with your peer review. I plan on adding more content following your input but the size of the page is quite small already so adding even a sentence makes a difference. Please bear in mind that this is a medical topic so there is very little room for "fluff" or opinions as this is not a diagnosed condition and every word counts when describing it. I have attempted to include such content and have been rejected so I am sticking to short sentences that deliver the point directly. I spend more time sourcing my content than I do writing it due to these stringent requirements. The page admins are very picky with the sources I have been choosing even though they have been accepting sites like "YouTube" and "BuzzFeed" as a sources..smh...anyways, go ahead. I hope this is how I was supposed to tag you. Anastasia.Shylnov (talk) 10:19, 9 November 2019 (UTC)


 * The content that you have is off to a good start. I would have to agree that I have had the same issue with my page. Keeping sentences short is the way to go. Also, I noticed that you have some pulled quotes. Remember to get rid of those as this isn't a traditional academic paper, and it still technically counts as plagiarism. Wiki is extremely sensitive to those kinds of things, which may be why your stuff got kicked back. Anyway, keep summing up important points. Not sure if your content revolves around CSB, but it would be an interesting addition to the page since it doesn't offer that perspective. Otherwise, other areas you may want to add content to is the medications subheading under Treatment or the political and religious movement subheading under Society and Culture. Amilon3 (talk) 01:20, 11 November 2019 (UTC)
 * The content that you have is off to a good start. I would have to agree that I have had the same issue with my page. Keeping sentences short is the way to go. Also, I noticed that you have some pulled quotes. Remember to get rid of those as this isn't a traditional academic paper, and it still technically counts as plagiarism. Wiki is extremely sensitive to those kinds of things, which may be why your stuff got kicked back. Anyway, keep summing up important points. Not sure if your content revolves around CSB, but it would be an interesting addition to the page since it doesn't offer that perspective. Otherwise, other areas you may want to add content to is the medications subheading under Treatment or the political and religious movement subheading under Society and Culture. Amilon3 (talk) 01:20, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

Final wiki contribution comments: Overall great content added, though it was a pretty small amount of content. Would have liked a little more Nlegate (talk) 17:38, 10 December 2019 (UTC)