User talk:Anbrown2/sandbox

Group #2 Doing the Review
Review #1 Hello, Overall your page looks pretty solid content wise! However there are a few things you can clean up/add to the page, one of them being your citations at the bottom. Try to make them so as they are in a list format rather than running continuously one after the other and making sure to use those sources in your paragraphs and chem box via in-text citations. Otherwise just add a little more information outside toxicity and you'll be good to go! Matejew2 (talk) 15:36, 28 October 2012 (UTC)

Review #2 Hey, This is a pretty decent article. I would like for you to explain a little further in depth as to what Azapiracid is or does in the opening paragraph. I would also like a picture and more info in the chembox. I would also like other section information other than toxicity for this chemical. Very good start. Chemfox11 (talk) 01:32, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #3 Hey, Nice job so far! Maybe try to find some information in some different categories. You could probably add more to your Chembox, maybe try to find an image. Try to organize your references a little better. Like Matthew said, you should put them in a list form. Good luck! Emmakepple (talk) 01:01, 2 November 2012 (UTC)