User talk:Andersonbriana4/sandbox

This review was really good! There are some grammatical errors so maybe just look over it a bit. Also, try not to refrain from using "we" for a Wikipedia entry. For example instead of "we can see" try to use "__ shows how .." I hope that makes sense!

Varun's Peer Review
The tone is a little too informal as the other commenter pointed out, also I don't see any new citations, so try to work that in, unless I just missed it in which case, try to make that more prominent. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Varunko (talk • contribs) 07:56, 2 November 2018 (UTC)