User talk:Andiefisher/sandbox

You say that they are home to many invertebrate species including ...... fish... Fish are not invertebrates? Maybe add a little bit about the fish species you find in the salt marshes or provide a link that would allow one to explore that more. You link Tampa Bay to another article, but you mention it earlier in the section, so I think you should just make the first mention of Tampa Bay the link. No major changes all the information is great. 14misiu21 (talk) 16:42, 15 November 2018 (UTC)

The content you have to be added does well of being informative and concise. The formatting looks good and the writing has a good flow to it. There are only two things I can think of recommending for improvement. Firstly, I think adding sub headings for different parts could potentially be helpful. Secondly, in the impacts section I think that it would be good to go over how different threats specifically impact the ecosystem. Zwinstead (talk) 05:31, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Hey hey Andy. Great job! The only edit I see that could be done is a citation added to the first sentence of the last paragraph. Otherwise, looks great!! Lawiggins (talk) 16:36, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

= Peer review from Dr. Smith = This is excellent writing! However if this is for the Ecology of Florida article, it should be very specific to Florida! So the first paragraph especially is about marshes in general. Narrow this writing down to Florida specific information. There is no need to introduce what a marsh is, since that is located on another Wiki page. You will not be deducted pts if this assignment is shorter than we discussed, just narrow it and make it specific to Florida before posting to the new Ecology of Florida article. Oikos6933 (talk) 16:10, 1 December 2018 (UTC)