User talk:Andrea Savio

Your submission at Articles for creation: Andrea Savio (December 19)
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Bjelleklang -  talk 21:35, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Relisting of draft
Hi. Relisting the draft so quickly with no significant changes does nothing to help you get it approved. I'm going to decline it again now, please read my comment and provide better references for the article. We take biographies on living people very seriously on Wikipedia, so this isn't something you can disregard if you want the article to become accepted. Bjelleklang -  talk 21:48, 19 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Hi, and thanks for your response. Being notable is not the same as being famous; please take a look at the General Notability Guideline: "If a topic has received significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject, it is presumed to be suitable for a stand-alone article or list." Generally this requires at least two independent sources with significant coverage and editorial oversight of some kind. When it comes to biographies of living people there is also an exception for anyone notable for one event only. This means that you cannot base your notability on having been with Tony Curtis; you must be notable on your own. You might want to take a look at WP:NACTOR or WP:NMUSIC to see a list of criteria that might help you. Even if you pass one of the criteria in those two guidelines it's not guaranteed that you are considered notable, but it might help you along when looking for sources. Bjelleklang -  talk 19:40, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Andrea Savio (December 19)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bjelleklang was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Bjelleklang -  talk 21:49, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Copyediting
I've done some copyediting to make the draft look better. I haven't significantly changed the content beyond shuffling it around a bit; personally I think significant amounts should be removed outright because, even if there were references, those parts would never be encyclopedic. This includes most of the content on her relatives unless it's directly relevant to Andrea Savio herself (backed up by a third-party source making that connection!), but also such trivia as the fact that she didn't see one of her own movies. Huon (talk) 01:40, 28 December 2014 (UTC)

Your username
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Draft:Andrea Savio concern
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Draft:Andrea Savio concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Andrea Savio, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Your draft article, Draft:Andrea Savio


Hello, Andrea Savio. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Andrea Savio".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 08:12, 2 March 2016 (UTC)