User talk:Andreabrisby/sandbox

Peer Review Hi Andrea! This is Claire, from your History of Science Class. I have read the Barbara McClintock article here on Wikipedia, as well as the work you have done in your sandbox. There are many users on the article's talk page, so I thought it would be easier to contact you on your sandbox. You have some great information to add to the Lead section of the article. I see some facts on your sandbox that have not been added to the page yet. Nice work! I think your information on the "jumping genes" will be a great contribution to the article, perhaps under the research section. I was unable to find any spelling or grammar issues in the main article. If possible, I would enhance the "Later Years" Subsection. It only has a couple sentences and is sparse. I do like how the article has cross-referenced and linked other pages, which helped me with a few scientific terms that I was unfamiliar with. I think this will be beneficial to other readers as well. This article will be enhanced when you synthesize the information that you have gathered. I definitely see neutrality in your writing, which is what is required in the article. Keep up the good work. Let me know if you would like any further peer review at a later date!

Barbara McClintock In her early age as being a scientist Claire.l.m (talk) 03:37, 20 November 2016 (UTC) Barbara McClintock