User talk:Andreuh.xo

Eating disorders
Hi! I saw that you added quite a bit to college health on eating disorders. You had some amazing sources, so I wanted to congratulate you on that - academic sourcing and sourcing from places like the Mayo Clinic are excellent things to use in an article. I did, however, notice that the content was written in an essay-like format and some of it looked to be unsourced because of how it was written. Be careful when writing in an encyclopedia-esque format, as it cannot contain statements that look to be written to persuade the reader. I went ahead and did some cleanup to the content and moved the sourcing into the article as in-line citations. I did remove quite a bit from some of the sections, but this was more because the content could be seen as redundant to the articles on the specific eating disorders since it was very general and didn't really address how the disorders affected college students per se. Let me know what you think! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:37, 8 August 2017 (UTC)