User talk:Andrew1Chaney/sandbox

I plan on using this article to add more detail to his biography and also to how he received the medal of honor after his death. There is information missing about where he is from in the current wikipedia article. There are also details on how his medal of honor came to be awarded after his death. The information was recently updated in 2013 which is acceptable because there has been no information or news stories about him since 2009. The source is reliable because it is a widely read biography on notable black figures in history. Comparing the article with all the other information I have read, this particular article seems very accurate. The purpose and relevance of this article are seemingly the same. The purpose of the article is to inform any reader of historical black figures such as John R. Fox. The article is trying to provide detail of a war hero from Cincinnati. The genre of the article is a web article extracted from a biography written in 2013.

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I'm sure you have citations you are going to use but none of them are in your article at the moment so I would recommend adding those. If this an article from scratch, I would recommend also adding in subheadings. Tittlere (talk) 01:29, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

I added all necessary citations before publishing and even added to the existing informations citations.Andrew1Chaney (talk) 16:15, 29 October 2018 (UTC)

I would recommend adding subheading to the article to help with organization. Also, I would recommend putting Fox's full name in the first sentence along with what he was best know for so the reader gets a better understanding of who they are reading about. Jliber (talk) 23:24, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

I didn't add the subheadings to my sandbox only because it would be more difficult to edit the actual live article. Also that shortening of his name was in the second paragraph. The opening/ lead paragraph was sufficient so i saw no need to edit it.Andrew1Chaney (talk) 16:15, 29 October 2018 (UTC)