User talk:Andrew Love-Jones

COI
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I haven't yet deleted your draft on Nick Fox to give you a bit of time to declare any COI and get it to conform with our guidelines (even the title is wrong). I suggest that you look at biographies such as Pamela C. Rasmussen to get an idea of layout and referencing. You don't have to use the fancy reference templates, just for web refs or  for books etc will do. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  16:07, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dr Nick Fox PhD OBE (May 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chrissymad was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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CHRISSY MAD ❯❯❯  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯  19:33, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Comment
I've deleted because we appear to already have Draft:Nick Fox, looks like the same guy Jimfbleak - talk to me?  20:15, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
 * If you want the deleted text I'll restore it temporarily for you in a sandbox, but but only edit the existing draft, which is just as bad though Jimfbleak - talk to me?  20:30, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
 * You can sign your comments automatically using four tildes ~.
 * First you must declare your paid editor status on your user page as in the form prescribed in my first reply. If you edit anything to do with Fox or his company without doing so, I'll block your account.
 * Secondly, we don't accept titles or qualifications in article titles. When I attempted to move your draft to the correct title, I found that Draft:Nick Fox already exists. We can't have two drafts on the same subject
 * I've made this edit to that draft. It removes an unsourced promotional claim (internationally recognised), adds some links to other Wikipedia articles to show you haw that done, and fixes the only proper reference it has.
 * Otherwise, just read my first reply. I've no intention of writing for free something you are being paid to do Jimfbleak - talk to me?  11:20, 3 May 2018 (UTC)