User talk:Andrewcm123/sandbox

You did a good job of cleaning up the article so that it reads clearly and smoothly. I think that there are a few ways to further improve the article. First, I think that the supporters section you added can be expanded. Most of the social justice activist community, beyond those directly affected by police brutality, support #SayHerName. So, I think that there is room for you to explore instances in which #SayHerName was the focal point of a protest or other kind of media campaign. Additionally, the last sentence about people doing social justice work online seems more fitting for an editorial and not an encyclopedia entry. Also, in the suggestions section, it may be helpful to explain further the five policy recommendations - why those five were chosen, if any actions have been taken to work on them, etc. Watkina (talk) 22:44, 8 March 2017 (UTC)