User talk:Andrewlane41/sandbox

Aaron's Review
Hi Andrew, it looks good! The only thing is try to be unbiased in your writing, as it comes off very political. Your hyperlinks are also good, but you need to include the references at the bottom.

Andrew's Peer Review
Andrew, your article is very good. I would edit the format of the page and add some headings and break up parts of your article. I think changing the format would make it a bit more aesthetically pleasing to the reader. If you add headings such as "arguments for" and "arguments against" I believe it would be beneficial to the reader. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Srast234 (talk • contribs) 13:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)