User talk:Andrewmcfar

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Hello, Andrewmcfar, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer review from Wen Liu
Your article has a very solid outline, I also like there is a lot of pictures to help the readers understand the content better, but please make sure all these pictures are ok to post, since the copyright issue is quite complicated on Wikipedia. Although this article is very informative, I am a little concerned about the tone you are using in it. For me, some part of this sounds more like a journal instead of a Wikipedia article. Also, please don’t forget to cite properly, instead of just putting the source up. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Breezelily (talk • contribs) 21:27, 22 October 2017 (UTC)