User talk:Andrianicole1/Opioid use disorder

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I would suggest doing a bit of grammar cleanup, and inserting clarity about the topic by adding more description on the withdrawal process for example, or even the epidemiology of opioid usage. A neutral tone could also be beneficial, other than that you're off to a great start. JazzyBen1234 (talk) 21:12, 5 October 2019 (UTC)

The content added is a good start in the direction of adding background about opioids, but it needs to be written in a more empirical manner with more details from the sources listed - this will add more value the article. Bilalabualrub (talk) 19:45, 6 October 2019 (UTC)

Your edits start off very strong and accurate, but I would definitely go more into detail about the pathophysiology behind opioid addiction. I would choose a less positive word for such an unfortunate circumstance to be in ->> This makes opioids more a popular substance to abuse. Definitely agree with JazzyBen123 in reference to making your edits more neutral tone. Hope this helps!! Mcampbell14 (talk) 22:20, 6 October 2019 (UTC)