User talk:Andyacad

. Could you please explain why you reversed the changes I made to the 'Fitness Boot Camp' page? In its current form the page is inaccurate. --Andyacad (talk) 17:44, 23 June 2014 (UTC)
 * See WP:ESSAY. &mdash;  LeoFrank  Talk 00:54, 24 June 2014 (UTC)

. Sorry, do not understand! Andyacad (talk) 06:34, 24 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry, it was a typo. Please see WP:NOTESSAY. &mdash;  LeoFrank  Talk 06:38, 24 June 2014 (UTC)
 * If you go through WP:NOT in general, it would be more informative. &mdash;  LeoFrank  Talk 06:40, 24 June 2014 (UTC)

. Somewhat baffled as I: 1) Have not conducted primary (original) research, although I did conduct some secondary research (there is a paragraph which defines Fitness Boot Camps towards the end which could be edited out without affecting the rest of the article, if that is an issue); 2) Have not 'created' personal invention; 3) Have not written a personal essay, my article is neutral other than to point out that the date for Boot Camps starting in 2005 is inaccurate and provide a citation with the actual date of 1999 (I did also work for the said company from 2001 to 2012); and 4) Have not 'created' a discussion forum.

In brief, I am still non-the-wiser on what I have done wrong. An overview of the issues(s) would be appreciated rather than just redirecting me to other pages. The page in its current guise contains a number of inaccuracies, besides the date, and is very scanty in detail.

Andyacad (talk) 09:22, 24 June 2014 (UTC)