User talk:AngelOfIron

Your edits made to The Simpsons article.
We appreciate your editions, but your edits (and your other past edits especially) to the Halloween episodes you made in The Simpsons is a complete NPOV bias. Please be civil in your edits, and not just simply write something or a totally negative subject that is entirely based on your own thoughts.

Someformofhuman 09:46, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

I can understand that, and I respect your decision to delete that post; though I'm also speaking from many, many people's reactions that I've seen first hand to the episodes. But what do you mean by "simply write something or a totally negative subject"? This confuses me, because a majority of what I've written has either done nothing more than correct sub-par grammar, or provide information that isn't widely known. I can't see how any of that would be considered a "negative subject," much less "completely biased."

AngelOfIron 03:24, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Tsukasa
I'm just curious as to the reasoning for editing the Tsukasa article. Specifically, changing "temporarily" back to "temporaly". You seem like an intelligent person, and I'm just kinda wondering what brought that on.

Dan 20:43, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Really? Odd, I must've missed that. I was trying to correct the grammer in the first place, heh, funny I should slip up like that. Thanks for pointing that out! I am a bit confused as to why my wording keeps changing though. As it stands it should correctly say

As revealed by many flashbacks of An's past shown in the series, her father subjected her to physical abuse, neglected her, and distanced her from her gender by treating her as though she were a boy (e.g. he refused to allow feminine products, didn't provide basic hygiene products, etc.) He also killed the kitten that she was taking care of and tried to un-plug the life support machines while she was in a coma.

The version that's up now, with the colon before the details of what An's father did wrong, appears to be incorrect grammar. No offense.

AngelOfIron 16:04, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

(e.g. he refused to allow her to you feminine products, didn't provide basic hygiene products, etc.)

Fixed that little bit up. You really should be more careful. Also, if someone reverts what you've done again, you might consider taking it to the talk page, rather than just reverting again. Um'kay? :3 Dan 23:41, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Thanks much, I owe you one.. And, heh, I would if I knew how. Honestly this is the farthest I've come to understanding the talk page. >_<;;;

AngelOfIron 23:00, 27 June 2007 (UTC)

Well, Here's the link for future reference. :3 Dan 19:08, 28 June 2007 (UTC)

Reply
Kazu-Kun, I'm wondering why you keep reverting the entry for Tsukasa back to what is clearly incorrect grammar. I've taken the liberty to go in and correct the errors you made, and yet you constantly seem to go out of your way to make sure that whatever's been changed gets changed back to whatever it was you wrote, despite if it's incorrect or not. AngelOfIron 20:45, June 30 2007 (UTC)


 * You're kinda rude there, you know? I reverted your edit because I thought it looked unclean. Brackets should be used only when strictly necessary, and the frase "distanced her from her gender by treating her as though she were a boy" strike me as OR. We don't know exactly what psychological problem is result of what mistreat.
 * Anyway, I did some re-wording and added some references. If you have any suggestion or want to keep discussing about this, bring the topic to the article's talk page.Kazu-kun 08:14, 1 July 2007 (UTC)

Better, I'll admit. And I didn't mean to come off as rude, but it would've been nice if you'd contacted me explaining why you edited. I guess you can relate when it comes to some stranger coming in and constantly changing your work, heh. So I apologize for coming off as bit of a jack ass. No hard feelings?

AngelOfIron 16:29, July 1 2007 (UTC)