User talk:Angela.P.E/sandbox

Hi Angela, it's Vinny! Here are some things I noticed in your Wiki Article so far:

"Communication apprehension, as defined by McCroskey, is" - I think you can leave out the "as defined by McCroskey" and just have it cited at the end (which you did.)

"forgetting the information, between many others." The wording here can be changed. "forgetting information, among many others." can be used instead.

"this response can be caused on a small group communication or even on a one on one communication." . Perhaps this can be worded as "this response can be observed within the communication between two individuals or those in a small group." Let me know what you think.

"In extreme cases one might be so anxious that they fear that they will forget their name or forget what they are talking about." Is there a citation for this? Maybe it can be worded like: "In extreme cases, individuals might experience so much anxiety that they can forget their names or lose their train of thought."

"If you would like to take the test: click here" - I would delete this part, or maybe cite this link in the references at the bottom of the page. I'm not 100% sure, but I don't think we can link externally within the articles themselves, unless it's for citation purposes.

Besides that, I think you're doing a great job on your article! You're definitely adding a great deal to it, which will help so much. Good luck!

Vwagner17 (talk) 02:44, 14 November 2017 (UTC)