User talk:Angelacaooo/sandbox

Simran's Review of Article Draft
Hi guys! Really great job working on this article. The tone and structure of this is great, and everything is very written without a bias / is very neutral. All of your sources work and are reliable, credible sources. I have a suggestion regarding the new section you guys are adding, 2019 Women's March Agenda. I think the phrasing could be a little different because the way it is now, I didn't understand why you guys were including the agenda in this article. Then, after reading further, I realized it is because it is the first federal policy platform they have created. I would start that section with that sentence alone. Something like "In 2019, the Women's March organization created the first federal policy platform regarding issues the organization endorses". This way, it is direct and the reader knows why this is relevant. Besides this, everything else looks great! Classikhgirl (talk) 04:06, 13 March 2019 (UTC)