User talk:Angelalin79/Terry Stop

Hey Angela! Great job on the edits and content you want to add. I think this is a great start and the proposed sections and structure are done really well. I think they will convey the necessary information to make this article more nuanced and consider the implications of the Terry Stop on the populations you've identified. I think that more sources and information need to be added to flesh out the section, but this is something that will happen as you keep working on the article. Overall great job and I can't wait to read once you're done! :)Melired (talk) 15:13, 30 March 2021 (UTC)

Feedback from Review
Hello! I wanted to offer some feedback I identified after completing a peer-review of this article. Overall, it does a great job of providing more comprehensive insight regarding Terry Stops and specifically highlighting neglected areas of research and public attention. This content could be potentially improved by introducing international research as well as citing every claim that is made within the contribution. Asmaley (talk) 18:57, 30 March 2021 (UTC)