User talk:Angelina.deltoro/Rudolph Fisher/VerityIncog Peer Review

you both have been very thorough in providing relevant subsections for easy navigation and have added a great deal of information about Fisher keeping an unbias tone. One revision to consider; under Literary career, perhaps finding a way to split up the contents of the paragraph will make information clearer and easier to find as the paragraph does not all focus on one topic. There is also an area in this paragraph where the tenses switch from past tense to present, so making sure you stick with one will be ideal. Overall, this is a great wikipedia page and you both are doing a really great job. VerityIncog (talk) 13:33, 19 November 2020 (UTC)