User talk:Anhill95/sandbox

Suggestions:

5 steps vs. 4 steps --> some conflicting text in the paragraph that mentions 5 steps instead of 4 that needs to be corrected.

confusing legend for the graph; I'm not sure what the arrows are pointing to More formatting (headers) would be helpful after the 4 steps section but before the next header. The sentence structure could be rephrased in the Regulation section about N-acetylglutamic acid

The substrate concentration regulation section is super interesting and I would love to see more detail about that. Also, more information in the "linkage with citric acid cycle" would be good too.

Ashbyaa (talk) 02:52, 9 April 2017 (UTC)