User talk:Anishnair

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Welcome!!--Dwaipayanc 08:38, 26 February 2006 (UTC)

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Hi Anish. I see that on 30th January,2006 you created two articles Ramprasad Bismil and Sarfaroshi ki Tamanna.I just wonder if it was under the immediate influnce of Rang De Basanti!! Anyway,please try to contribute more in Wikipedia and do visit Revolutionary movement for Indian independence and also the category of the same name.You will find lots of revolutionaries who do not have any articles.Please feel free to start those article/edit other articles.Thank you.--Dwaipayanc 08:38, 26 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Hi Anish! The article on Ramprasad Bismil have an apparent flaw, which is the language.There is a policy in Wikipedia, the NPoV, that tells you how to , or rather, how not to write in Wikipedia. Your article contains NPoV language. You can see the recent debacle over Bagha Jatin, where the initial version - that contained somewhat emotional / dramatic language was not retained. Even the second version was not retained. You can follow the history or talk page of Bagha Jatin to get an idea about how the language of an artucle should be. Your article clearly contains dramatic effects, and it reads like a story - this is usually not retained in any encyclopedia.You may soon see in the article Ramprasad Bismil a notice or major changes by other users.If you yourself can modify the article, that is best. Because in certain instances, article with NPoV language/content has been ruthlessly edited in the past.Thank you, ank keep editing! bye.--Dwaipayanc 06:41, 3 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Hi Anish! The section "The execution" in Ramprasad Bismil has been labeled as NPoV.Please discuss the issue in the article's talk page, and try to re-write the portion.Thanks.--Dwaipayanc 16:44, 13 March 2006 (UTC)