User talk:AnjaRaggio/sandbox

Hi Anja, overall the article is well expressed, the only suggestion that I can give you is to add some key passages of the cycle, to make it more detailed. In any case, it is very smooth, well done.

Hello Anja,

In my opinion, your article has a great structure allowing its reading to be smooth and enjoyable. Maybe more in-depth details are needed for a reader that has already some level of knowledge on the topic. However, for first-time readers, which are the main users of Wikipedia, this is fantastic as all the key steps are presented clearly.

Great job! LorenzoPetrella (talk) 16:18, 22 December 2019 (UTC)