User talk:Anmuelle/sandbox

Cumin is a tropic or semi-tropic crop despite its origin is most probably Egypt It's not really clear what you mean by that. Do you mean that -cumin is a tropic/semi-tropic crop AND its origin is in Egypt, etc. -cumin is USED in the tropics DESPITE its origin (Egypt, etc). I would also add a reference.

The open canopy of cumin is another problem. On one hand only a low proportion of the incoming light is absorbed. When you use "on one hand" you MUST use something like "and on the other hand...". For example, do something like this: "The open canopy of cumin, it has a Leaf Area Index of approximately 1.5, is a problem because only a low proportion of the incoming light is absorbed by the plant".

I suggest that you try to add coordination conjungtions in order to improve the readability of the article. Allthough it is clear what you mean, it is a little "choppy" (the sentences are very short and this gives the impression of the content not being connected) - but this is my opinion.

create superscripts like this:  write text in superscript here

I suggest you add unit transformations for the american readers. You can find a list of different on how to do this here and the syntax on how this works is here (look at "single value"). fdubach (talk) 15:33, 19 November 2013 (UTC)fdubach

@ fdubach
thank you for feedback! :-) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anmuelle (talk • contribs) 15:04, 20 November 2013 (UTC)