User talk:Anna-Mastrangelo/sandbox

Anna's Peer Review
After looking through your submission in your sandbox I don't think anything needs to be changed. The information is relevant to the article, the content is neutral, nothing is over-represented or under-represented, the citations work and are up to date. The grammar looks fine to me.

My own review
I need more sub topics to lengthen my article. On my existing sub topics I need more information because right now I think there is too little information (underrepresented). I also believe I need more references/hyperlinks. Anna-Mastrangelo (talk) 16:52, 21 March 2018 (UTC)