User talk:Annabarickman/sandbox

Edits for Article Addition -Brian Myers
 * These additions and edits are very good. You presented really good citations and facts to strengthen the article.
 * I think your sentence "Two groups that historically exhibit dissimilarities in health and life span are white Americans and black Americans," doesn't fit properly within the introduction. If you were to expand on the dissimilarities between whites and other races it may work better. Even though the article does talk a lot about the differences between whites and blacks, it is still talking about other races.
 * "According to the Journal of Behavioral Medicine, America continues to become more diverse." This sentence could use some elaboration. I know you follow up with some statistics, but maybe comparing the 2000 US Census to the 2010 Census would help display the increasing diversity.
 * Overall, your additions were very strong. Your sources are very good.