User talk:Annalam9585/sandbox

I really appreciated your article draft. The information is well balanced and well researched. I noticed your use of statistics and commend you for being so knowledgeable on your topic. The only critique I would provide is to maybe shorten your contribution just a tad as I'm not sure if it's too long possibly? Otherwise, it's been done very well. Between the formatting, content, and structure, it's a very engaging wikipedia entry and would greatly improve the existing article! - Bryson.jones (talk) 16:28, 19 April 2018 (UTC)