User talk:Annariptide19*/sandbox

I am reviewing Annariptide19*'s sandbox. User:Annariptide19*/sandbox This sandbox needs a lead.

First sentence in "Life in Norway" can be broken up in to two; I am unclear about if you will need to cite the first sentence since it will be separated from the second one. "Helga was two years old when her father died. Her mother, Karen Hendrikstatter Johanssen remarried etc..." 1) what is the East Coast Party 2) If a wikipedia page exists for it, I would link it in the article The sectioning is good, I know you said you were planning on adding more sections but some should be about the walk (maybe in order of important events during the walk, or Beginning Middle and End, or every few months) Should include a Death section, and capitalize the C in cemetery at the end of the actual article overall, looks good!! :) Wasmr23 (talk) 23:34, 12 March 2020 (UTC)