User talk:Annavlaminck/sandbox

Anna, your entry on Sustainable Collections Care is very informative and in a good neutral voice. This is a particularly relevant topic and definitely has an impact on preventative conservation for collections. I think your sections are appropriate and you may even be able to add more subsections, like “Solar” under “Alternative Energy Sources”. I think your wikilinks and external links are helpful and enhance understanding of your topic. There are a couple grammatical and formatting issues that could be cleaned up, like the vertical bar | that appears before the museum names. It would also be helpful to add some pictures with examples of sustainable technology in museums. This is a great first entry and I enjoyed reading about the topic! CourtnyeKoi (talk) 16:34, 16 February 2017 (UTC)

Hi Anna- This is definitely a relevant collections/preventative conservation topic! This is not a topic I have done much research in, so it was really interesting to read through all of the information and ways to incorporate green design into preventative conservation. I thought you did a great job of summarizing the information without making the topic overwhelming with too many details. You presented a variety of information that could easily be utilized by museums who want to incorporate sustainable collections care, from green buildings to choosing sustainable materials and recycling! Also, all of the links to other Wiki pages and outside sources throughout were great! Dmcadams jhu (talk) 21:58, 18 February 2017 (UTC)