User talk:AnniePJordan/sandbox

Response to Anne's peer review
Hi Anne! I really appreciate all your points and I definitely agree. Each bullet point with the source I have written in my sandbox are supposed to be different sentences in a literature section hopefully, although the structure is definitely not there yet. I will definitely ask my professor for more information regarding Fan, as it has been quite difficult for me to find genuine sources with his writings and not just reviews of someone else's work. I am glad someone else understands the difficulty of finding proper English language sources about these types of topics. You are correct in that I should expand on his writings more than just about mei flowers. I am really looking to add a section about his Buddhist endeavor to Mount Emei in Sichuan Province, so I think that should help on adding more information about him personally (his Buddhist beliefs) and his travel literature. I think your feedback has given me some more confidence in finding more information about my article. I know it can be done I just have to have the diligence to track down the proper information and be able to add it to the article. Again, I really appreciate your feedback and I will be using it as a guide for my article additions! Best of luck on your article as well!MilkisWack1065 (talk) 04:14, 6 March 2019 (UTC)