User talk:Anniecprice/sandbox

I found your topic very interesting and the structure of your article makes a lot of sense. I wondered while reading if you could include the consequences of the language and gender barriers to education as they seem important (but possibly too complicated to include) (I.e. access to education for non-French speakers could be discussed in more depth?). Also, adding more about why gender inequality in schools has been hard to overcome so far/why it is so prominent in that nation could be helpful. Overall, the format and language of your article look great, I found the first sentence confusing in structure so it could be made more strong (just because it is how you start the article). It looks great, nice job!