User talk:Anniep256/WALL-E/Jaimeneto17 Peer Review

Jaime, you do a very good job of explaining what inspired Dr. Seuss to create this film and introducing his wife. I realize now that it may be a good idea for me to also include the inspiration of the creation of Wall-E. Your paragraph also has a clear structure and is easy to read. I would suggest maybe adding in the importance of the film, too in addition to the inspiration. I also think it would be a good idea to introduce the actors that played in the film as well as who they played closer to the start of your article, unless you plan on doing that in the 2nd or 3rd paragraph. Overall, good start!__Anniep256 (talk) 01:57, 19 March 2021 (UTC) Annie