User talk:Anonymous Lotus/sandbox

Anonymous Lotus (talk) 16:38, 23 October 2019 (UTC)

'Peer Review

Hiii, Reika!

The very first sentence seems a bit wordy, so you might want to make it concise. The history section is basically chronological, which is easy to follow for the audience. I'm not sure if the pumping stations section is necessary or not since it seems like there's not enough explanation about the pumping stations. I think you could develop the section about sanitation more because the title of this article is water supply and sanitation in Hong Kong. BUT, the history section is well-written and the language and tone are neutral.

Good job!!!!!!! --Camille Ponzu (talk) 23:59, 19 November 2019 (UTC)