User talk:Anonymouslycool22/Gamete

Peer Review
Overall, your article is very well written! You have added a sizeable amount of content and citations. Good work!

I only have a few critiques. First, I would add in-text citations at the end of each section so that readers can easily locate the sources of your information. It seems like the original author left some out, as well. Second, I would recommend removing filler phrases such as "as stated above", "in shorter terms" and "to give a recap". Generally, these phrases aren't necessary for encyclopedic writing (which is generally very dry) and can take away from the information you are presenting. Finally, I would recommend re-wording the section on the evolution of gametes. It reads a bit redundant, in my opinion. You could also add more information about meiosis!

You could condense it like this:

There are two primary forms of reproduction, sexual and asexual. Sexual reproduction is the most complex, as it requires the recombination of gametes. Gametes, such as egg and sperm cells, are formed via meiosis. During this process... [explain the process of meiosis and include a diagram?]

I am impressed with your work! BusyBee222 (talk) 17:02, 1 April 2024 (UTC)