User talk:Ans1024/sandbox

Alayna, this is going to be ready to launch by the end of class. You still need one solid final proofread and copyedit. Professional, public writing is not like college writing, so let Katrina read it out loud while you keep the edit window open, and your group helps you catch those lingering grammatical errors and sentence-level awkwardness. In particular, double-check all of your internal links, ok? Some should be fully spelled out (eg, Brown University); others need spell-check (does Wikipedia use the older spelling "Micmac"?) Otherwise, you did excellent research and writing: such a nice testament to Liz and her work. I'll take one more look about 3:15 and you should be ready to roll!Ssenier (talk) 01:22, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

Whoa, Alayna, this is looking GREAT! Start adding some internal links to other Wikipedia pages. Also, maybe you know this, but the "references" and "published works" are currently backwards, at least in labeling. For her, it would actually be good to create a list of Publications (check out the Winona LaDuke article and see how they did a section called Books, Films and Media. Yours will be shorter, for Liz, but that's the basic idea.) The trick here too is still to convince Wikipedia that she is "notable" by finding news articles ABOUT her. Do you feel like you have three of those, or do you need more help finding some?Ssenier (talk) 23:59, 9 April 2019 (UTC)