User talk:Ant N York/sandbox

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback Name of student reviewer: User: Cgchapman

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Date of review: 05/10/2013

Name of editor: User: Ant_N_York

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URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox/

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 05/10/2013

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Length of edit (too long/too short): Good length

Image (needed/appropriate): Not needed

Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Edit information accurate to textbook

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A

Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): Edit information accurate and relevant to I/O Psychology

Wikiformatting: Good Formatting

Grammar & composition: Good grammer

Other comments:None Cgchapman (talk) 16:01, 10 May 2013 (UTC)

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback Name of student reviewer: Hmehta0120

Date of review: 5/8/2013

Name of editor: Ant_N_York

URL of editor’s Userpage:	http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox#Personality_Sandbox/Personality

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 5/8/2013

Date review submitted to instructor: 5/8/2013 Length of edit: I find your length well. Provide the information in a simple and great manner. Image (needed/appropriate): N/A- I would recommend you add an image because there are many wiki editors of that page that have added images. So if possible I would saw add an image. Review of textbook information: Very accurate to the textbook, and liked how you cited the textbook.

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed:N/A Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych):N/A Wikiformatting:	reat wiki formation. Paragraph form and like the way you bought in external links throughout the format.

Grammar & composition: Found no errors, looks good to me.

Other comments: Great edit, like the formatting of it. And if you add an image would help you get more creativity points. Great Job! Good Luck

Hmehta0120 (talk) 21:39, 8 May 2013 (UTC)

Trinirebel (talk) 02:27, 9 May 2013 (UTC)

Aisha Hamid (talk) 17:49, 9 May 2013 (UTC)