User talk:Anthonyseng09/Angkor Borei

Your entry is missing some critical basic information. For example, the opening paragraph of the entry should include a clear statement about the country in which Angkor Borei is located and the time periods in which it is significant.

Please note that hyperlinks are a critical part of all Wikipedia entries. They help readers to find quick access to related topics and in-depth information. Your entry has no hyperlinks, which were an important part of the assignment. I've added some, but the entire entry needs to be revised to include others.

This is a really nice topic, but I would have like to have seen some additional commentary about "archaeological myths and realities" in it. For example, further discussion about the archaeology of the legendary Preah Thaong. Hoopes (talk) 20:54, 3 December 2012 (UTC)