User talk:Antigoni.pt

Hello Antigoni, I've gone ahead and made some grammatical edits such as sentence restructuring and some minor errors such as capitalizing and adding syntax to make your arguments clearer. My only suggestion is that like in any art history paper, it would be great if you could give concrete examples for when you describe the conceptual content of Kounellis' work; for example, when you say that he believes art should be influenced by daily life, how do you see this belief manifest in his work? Or when you say he uses "unusual materials", you could very easily state just a couple of examples of such materials to give the reader a more specific idea of what his body of work entails. A lot of your decisions to include biographical details are effective and helpful in creating a more holistic understanding of Kounellis's work.

Vsmoon (talk) 15:53, 6 April 2013 (UTC)

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