User talk:Antonellasemaan/sandbox

Peer Review- Sam Hunter
The lead of the article does a good job summarizing what Ongamira is. It tells the reader that Ongamira is a valley, gives the location, and orgin of the valley's name. This gives a good picture of what the entire article will talk about: saying that it is known naturally and archaeologically for its landscape. The lead talks about Ongamira's natural and archeological importance, which tie into the subcategories of georgraphy and history. Based off of the lead I have a general overview of what Ongamira is. Good job!

The structure is very clear in the article. The lead does a clear job of explaining what Ongamira is and helps direct what the rest of the article will be about. It was a smart choice to add the geography section before history and then end with references.

The overall balance of the article is consistent. Each sections length is similar to one another, however, I think that each section could use more information/material. As a reader, I would like to more about the geography of Ongamira. The geography sections speaks about Ongamira's natural features but does not talk about where it is located (although this is talked about in the lead section). Geography is defined as: the study of the physical features of the earth and its atmosphere, and of human activity as it affects and is affected by these, including the distribution of populations and resources, land use, and industries. This article touches on the physicals features but is missing the population, atmosphere, etc. that could help add substance to the article.

The article is written in a NPOV. All information is presented as fact and is not written to sway the reader.

This article uses many sources for the length and amount of information. The author used 4 credible sources for the content of this article, one of which is a government website. The sources are strong and add value to the article. Great research!

Overall, I am VERY impressed with the article you did. It is very impressive that you created an entire new article start to finish. You gave a great starting point and I am curious to see how it grows from here!

Wonderful start.. hope to see more content soon! Sam2072976 (talk) 09:00, 13 February 2019 (UTC)