User talk:AntonioZDiaz/Pain management during childbirth

Benign Tumor Group Peer Review
GZAM33 Peer Review

In the following paragraph, it may be useful to add links to the references within the paragraph. There are several articles referenced. Adding links to the specific sentences with references would make it easy to navigate to that specific source.

A specific child-birth class that has been researched and evaluated is the “Bonapace Method.” This is an educational intervention that aims to reduce pain during childbirth. This method uses both the pregnant person’s significant partner in addition to pain control techniques. These pain control techniques are based on three neurophysiological pain models: 1. The Gate control theory; 2. CNS control through cognitive structuring and breathing; and 3. Hyperstimulation of acupressure trigger points. Essentially, the partner will massage pressure points on sensitive areas of the body including the hand, calf and sacrum. This is intended to distract the brain from pain from contractions.

The efficacy of this method was studied in a multicenter case control study. It showed that compared to a traditional childbirth training program, pregnant people using the Bonapace Method had a lower pain perception in terms of both unpleasantness and intensity. Pregnant people looking to reduce pain during labor through educational interventions should consider looking into the Bonapace Method and figure out if it is right for them. Gzam33 (talk) 18:28, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

Jliu39 Peer Review

Delete the word "lead" from right under the Article Draft heading. Why is natural methods in quotation marks (Article Draft section)? That might imply subjective judgement of natural methods.

In the Preparation section, continue changing "woman/women" to make sure that gender-neutral language is consistently being used (first and second paragraphs especially) The use of "multicenter case control study" when describing the Bonapace method may be too high reading/understanding level and not easily understood by the general public. Consider including hyperlinks for the following: 1. The Gate control theory; 2. CNS control through cognitive structuring and breathing; and 3. Hyperstimulation of acupressure trigger points for increased clarity and understanding.

In the Non-Pharmacologic section, provide citation for "A review of the effectiveness of non-medical approaches to pain relief found that water immersion, relaxation methods, and acupuncture relieved pain".

Overall: Citations needed for all evidence throughout the draft. Review sections for additional hyperlinks that can be added for increased clarity.

Ucredpanda Peer Review Lead:

Links in first sentence may not seem necessary. Case management for treatment seems a bit of a stretch.

What is outlook?

"Tension increases pain during labor" seems kind of out of place

First paragraph e.g. "Virtually all pregnant persons worry about how they will cope with the pain of labor and delivery." seems kind of subjective and would like to see a citation of some survey study or something

Do "natural methods" need quotes?

Second paragraph about importance of pain is confusing. All pain has some purpose?

History:

Like a citation for historical sentiments

Preparation:

"It is possible to take a childbirth class, consult with those managing the pregnancy, and writing down questions can assist in getting the information that a woman needs to help manage pain." needs a grammatical look and gendered language scrutiny

Question whether Escott et al need to be mentioned in writing vs. a citation. The block quote isn't wiki like

Link to Bonapace method if such page exists

both... and

Do not need to mention the quality of data/study in wiki

Non-pharm:

Need more citations for waterbirth

Pharm:

Need citations for opioid section

Last sentence about valid questions seems opinionated — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ucredpanda (talk • contribs) 18:42, 12 September 2022 (UTC)