User talk:Antoniohfl/sandbox

Iva's Peer Review
I like the way you place you explained your first paragraph. However, I noticed some punctuation and grammar errors. I think you can use some transition words to better explain and organize your sentences in both paragraphs. Search online you can find some helpful transition words for your content. I think you need to better explain this sentence: It is also cause by the fact that protestant are stronger believer and more aware of the soul's condition than Catholic.