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Detoxification, I would be talking about types of detoxification and how are they acquired and their side effects and benefits

Evaluation of the article
History of books This Wikipedia page include some content gap. After talking about the first book evidence getting from King Neferirkare, the author jumped into Calamus without informing the public on how it is connected with the first writing process or is it used by king Neferirkare. the author jumped into the writing from the history of the books. Most of the sources under the section of Papyrus need to have an end note from other sources as it shows history of Pharaoh and the specific year. there are couple of edit on sources on this article talk page where they are asking for "citation needed". "Many of these codices were stored in temples but were ultimately destroyed by the Spanish explorers"[1] if they were destroyed by the Spanish explorer then how they were able to find it? the focused of this article is distracting on writing more than the history of books.Another content gap is mentioned that paper was cheaper under the middle ages subheading but didn't mentioned how. one of the sources is taken from a Teen ink magazine which is kind of some articles written by teens anonymously and anyone can write them and delete them easily which means this not a reliable source. This article is rated as C which mean this article has some content gap and not some reliable sources[2]. the talk page of this article discusses about some of the arguments i have discussed as the focused is more on writing then the history of books, another is it just talk about during the time of Pharaohs then not about other centuries and just jumped to electronic books. the text is underrepresented as it talksabout some of the countries's books history but not most of them. English studies This Wikipedia page looks like going under construction. It includes a lot of content gap. For instance it doesn't discuss about how English studies is studied in countries that it mentioned in the beginning. The article is based on author's personal bias as most of the article lack outside sources which shows this author includes their own bias in it. the sources in this article are just 5 or 6 and two of them are the commercial websites. as mentioned before the sources that are mentioned are not used throughout the article. This article lacks critical thinking as it doesn't talk about the purpose of English studies. According to some comments on this page it looks like author is adding some information that is false. This article is rated as start sub which means that the person is the just the beginner and most of the information is not reliable on this page.

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Working on Detoxification
Detoxification In this article, I will be working on some content gaps. Some of the content gaps in this article is it lacks the main goal of detoxification and doesn't talk about what are the different kind of detoxification and how they could be performed. The person used a dictionary on the definition of detoxification that shows that the author has no clue on this topic and just writing from other sources even the definition. Because of the content gap, I will talk about how to perform detoxification in natural form and what diets could help detoxification. one of the source that i found is article that talks about the food that helps to process detoxification and the other article that i found talks about the benefits and side effects of detoxification.Detoxification, I would be talking about types of detoxification and how are they acquired and their side effects and benefits Anwaramna15 (talk) 00:55, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

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