User talk:Aoba47/Archive 3

Copyedit
Also, one of my changes was: He stated the development of the character reflected the increasing invisibility of LGBT issues on television and in everyday society to He stated the development of the character reflected the increasing visibility of LGBT issues on television and in everyday society relying on common sense, because I was unable to verify with the source provided. If that was not the intended meaning, I apologize. Cheers,  MediaKill13  ( talk )   13:09, 5 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the c/e! I greatly appreciate your edit as you are correct and it does greatly improve the sentence. I don't know how I missed that big mistake lol. Aoba47 (talk) 16:17, 5 August 2016 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Shannen Says
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Your GA nomination of Shannen Says
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Your GA nomination of Shannen Says
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Your GA nomination of Tempt, Tease and Touch
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Your GA nomination of Tempt, Tease and Touch
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Of course, Gwen...
Hey Aoba47. Could you look comment your opinions on both this and that? I have nominated two articles in the past day and neither of them have had much attention, so it would be greatly appreciated! Thanks. Carbrera (talk) 02:46, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
 * There is nothing wrong with choosing articles and subject mater that you enjoy. I have certainly chosen some crazy subject matters to focus on for my research (mostly Passions-related stuff) lol. I will definitely review your nominations as soon as I can (over the next couple of days). Unfortunately, I believe your FAC for This Is What the Truth Feels Like will be flagged by more users as violating FA criterion 1e given that it is currently only edit-accessible to administrators. If it is alright with you I will start with the featured list candidate until the matter with the FAC is cleared up by more experienced users. Aoba47 (talk) 02:58, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Just in case you were curious, the user ban on the This Is What the Truth Feels Like article was lifted as of yesterday. Just thought I'd let you know. :) Carbrera (talk) 02:21, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I am in the middle of job applications and working on a particular annoying draft in my sandbox, but I will get to it as soon as I have time if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 02:59, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Hey, since the FA nom for This Is What the Truth Feels Like was unfortunately withdrawn by myself, I decided to work on "Make Me Like You" so I nominated that instead. Feel free to look at it if you have the time. However, do not feel obliged to do so, I keep asking you for so many favors! ;) Carbrera (talk) 03:47, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
 * No worries, I will look at it as soon as I have the time. I ask you for a lot of favors so you are all good :-) Aoba47 (talk) 04:01, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I have added a comment to your FAC for "Make Me Like You" if that is okay with you. I am not sure why it is not listed with the rest of the FACs. Aoba47 (talk) 01:33, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I renominated "Make Me Like You" since the two weeks are up here. Thanks for all of your help! Carbrera (talk) 04:16, 2 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for letting me know. I will add my review as soon as I have the time. I will be busy all this weekend, and most of next week, but I will make sure to help you with this sometime in the future. Aoba47 (talk) 23:28, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

Shannen Says copyedit

 * Thank you, as always! Aoba47 (talk) 17:21, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Glad to help as always, and congrats on GA. All the best,  Mini  apolis  17:32, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
 * You are always a very big help, and thank you! I enjoyed working on this article a lot more than I expected lol. Aoba47 (talk) 17:48, 13 August 2016 (UTC)

Talkback
North America1000 22:41, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

No Time for It

 * Thank you! As always, you have improved the article a great deal. Have a wonderful rest of your day. Aoba47 (talk) 21:52, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the kind words, and you do the same. All the best,  Mini  apolis  23:47, 25 August 2016 (UTC)

Source review for The Ecstatic?
Hi. I noticed your name at the FAC source review requests section and would like to ask if you could do a source review for my FA nomination of The Ecstatic. Dan56 (talk) 07:31, 26 August 2016 (UTC)


 * Unfortunately, I will be extremely busy with work for the next several weeks, so I will be unable to do a proper source review for your FAC. Good luck with your FAC, and I apologize for being unable to help you further at this moment. Aoba47 (talk) 15:47, 26 August 2016 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Janeway Lambda one
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Thank You

 * Awesome! I am glad to hear about that the article passed. I look forward to working with you again in the future. Aoba47 (talk) 02:03, 27 August 2016 (UTC)

DYK for Tempt, Tease and Touch
Gatoclass (talk) 00:01, 27 August 2016 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Janeway Lambda one
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Tempt, Tease and Touch
Hello:

The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Tempt, Tease and Touch has been completed.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Kind regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 13:39, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:07, 27 August 2016 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

 * Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate your kind words and support. Aoba47 (talk) 17:31, 27 August 2016 (UTC)

JL1 lauds
I'd like to start out by apologizing for never contributing to Featured article candidates/Did You Hear What Happened to Charlotte King?/archive1. I had this impression that FACs went for a really long time (at least a month) before they closed, so I hadn't gotten around to it. I'm sorry. On the plus side, it made it! Yay! What brought me here however, was your work on Janeway Lambda one. I am so terribly impressed with your work on that article! I never, in my wildest dreams, would have expected there to be enough material to build an article around such a topic. Wow! Keep up the good work! If you're a Trekkie, maybe I'll see you at WP:TREK? Anyways, cheers! —  fourthords  &#124; =Λ= &#124;  17:50, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for kind words! And no worries about the FAC. I think FACs usually take a month, but I was fortunate enough for have several people help me out with it so it went by very quickly. And thank you for your comment about Janeway Lambda one. I put a lot of time and energy into it as I was really interested and learning more about the production and development of that storyline. I am planning on working on it even more to get it to the level of an FA. I would definitely love to work on more with Star Trek-related articles. I am have recently re-watched Voyager (that was the one I grew up on), and I am looking forward to watching the rest (Voyager was the only television series from Star Trek I have seen all the way though up to this point). Please feel free to let me know if you need any help with anything. I always enjoy working with other people on here. I think the community aspect of Wikipedia is the best part. Aoba47 (talk) 18:11, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Help
I nominated Allen Walker to FA Featured article candidates/Allen Walker/archive1. However, the article's talk page doesn't have a the update I already wrote the nomination. Any idea? Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 17:55, 6 September 2016 (UTC)
 * It takes a while for the FAC to update on the talk page so this is pretty normal. Give it some time and it should be automatically updated. Aoba47 (talk) 18:02, 6 September 2016 (UTC)


 * Ah, thanks.Tintor2 (talk) 18:16, 6 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Anytime. Aoba47 (talk) 18:18, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

DYK for Janeway Lambda one
Gatoclass (talk) 16:01, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the update. Aoba47 (talk) 16:10, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Arthur (video game series)
In a similar vein to Madeline (video game series), I decided to create an article on the video games in the Creative Wonders LearningBuddies series featuring Arthur. The scope expanded a little bit when I realised Arthur games expand a little bit beyond LearningBuddies. Nevertheless, I just created a first draft and I'd love for you to check it out. :)--Coin945 (talk) 04:57, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Wow! Great work with that article so far. I am very impressed. I will definitely check it out and help out as much as I can when I have the chance. I'm not that great at Wikipedia, but I will try my best. Aoba47 (talk) 04:59, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I think you're amazing at Wikipedia! Your work so far is awesome. I know Madeline and Arthur are good, and they have the potential to be great! Those sources I added to the Madeline talk page should help you out. I was reading through some of them and am amazed by the interesting information there is out there. :D--Coin945 (talk) 05:13, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you, but I still have a lot to learn. I greatly appreciate any help with the Madeline article, and good luck with the Arthur articles. I will help whenever I can and have the time. Aoba47 (talk) 05:20, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

Carmen Sandiego

 * If you've been bitten by the edutainment bug, may I suggest Carmen Sandiego (video game series) as a project? I've done a lot of work on individual games but I've never gotten around to working on the series article. It's one of the most successful edutainment franchises ever and one that has nostalgic value to me. Check out my work on Carmen Sandiego's Great Chase Through Time! :D--Coin945 (talk) 10:54, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Great work on those pages. Carmen Sandiego's Great Chase Through Time is actually one of my favorite edutainment games so I think it is awesome that you put some much work into it. I actually think you did a majority of the heavy lifting for the Madeline article so I can definitely take some points and tips from you. I have also nominated the Madeline for GAN just so you know, and submitted a hook related to it for DYK so it could appear on the main page and hopefully get some more attention and support. Thank you again! Aoba47 (talk) 17:39, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

Madeline

 * I think I may have been a bit too comprehensive with my work on the article. It needs copyedit or two to make it flow smoother and present information more concisely - I'll leave it to you. In other news, as I said on the talk page, I'm essentially done with this article. I'm ready to move onto something new. Would you like to collaborate further after this article? :)--Coin945 (talk) 14:35, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I have submitted a request for this article to be copy-edited through the WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors and I will go through and do some copy-editing of my own. I think that it is great that you did so much comprehensive research and work! I would love to collaborate with you in the future, but I will probably take a break from heavy lifting on here (for real this time) as there is a lot of things that I want to get done outside of Wikipedia. While I really enjoyed working on this article, it took a lot of me lol. But, thank you again for your support. :-) Aoba47 (talk) 15:42, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for adding yourself to the nomination. I feel like you did most of the work on this article lol. I was about to do it, but I forgot how to add you so I am glad that you did it first :) Aoba47 (talk) 17:37, 10 September 2016 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

 * Thank you! That is very sweet of you. I owe a lot of the work to Coin945, who did an amazing job finding all those resources, and I really enjoyed being able to closely collaborate with people on here. It did take a lot of work, but I am very proud of it. Hopefully, it will inspire other users to consider an edutainment article when picking an article to expand or revise. Aoba47 (talk) 22:45, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

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Peer review - GOT
Hello Aoba47, Sorry to bother you, but I have nominated the episode "Battle of the Bastards"(Season 6, Episode 9 from Game of Thrones( Spoiler Alert )) for a peer review(Peer review/Battle of the Bastards/archive1). The article has already passed for a Good Article. I would appreciate it, if you have any time, could you just give a look and tell me what in the article I can improve, for it to someday become a "Feature Article". AffeL (talk) 21:31, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your message. I will provide my comments sometime later in the week if that is okay. Since I have not seen this episode, or even this season, then it might be helpful to get my point of view to make sure everything is clear to an unfamiliar reader. And do not worry about the "Spoiler Alert" warnings as I am not interested in the show. Aoba47 (talk) 21:37, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much. Take all the time, there is no hurry. I am just glad that you are willing to have a look. AffeL (talk) 22:00, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * No worries! Aoba47 (talk) 22:06, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I just want to let you know that I have not forgotten about this. I promise to get comments up by tomorrow night (well, tomorrow night for me. I am not sure about your time zone so I can't say for sure how that matches up). I apologize for the delay. This week has been hectic for me, and I'm trying to take a break from here to be more productive irl. Aoba47 (talk) 06:25, 16 September 2016 (UTC)

QQ
Do you think you could take a look at my edits for "Make Me Like You"? I took your suggestion with "S&M" and after some minor edits, the two articles seem highly comparable. I would appreciate any further feedback; like I said, I'm willing to do anything for this candidate. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 21:53, 13 September 2016 (UTC).
 * I will review the article and provide further feedback as soon as I have the time. I have been rather busy lately, so I apologize for the delay. Aoba47 (talk) 23:03, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Please take your time, I'm in no hurry, plus you're doing me the favor. :) Carbrera (talk) 23:38, 13 September 2016 (UTC)

Janeway Lambda one
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Twofingered Typist (talk) 21:11, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
 * As always, thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 14 September 2016 (UTC)

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DYK for Madeline (video game series)
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Redirecting the individual Madeline video articles
I think we should redirect the individual Madeline article, given the comprehensiveness of the series article. Thoughts? (Also, given my recent additions to the article, it needs a copyedit or two. Still, it's an incredible article on an edutainment video game that I hope increased the genre's perceived legitimacy across Wikipedia)--Coin945 (talk) 13:24, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I agree with your opinion about redirecting the individual Madeline article as the series article is comprehensiveness to cover everything. I have submitted a request in the WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors, so it will be copyedited by an outside part sometime in the next month. You have done an incredible job with this article, so you should be proud of this work. Good luck with future work as well. Aoba47 (talk) 17:14, 22 September 2016 (UTC)

image
Hi

Can you check this page? i think the image is too large. thanks :)--Near cosmos (talk) 00:21, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I will resize the image and upload a small version right now. Aoba47 (talk) 00:30, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks again!--Near cosmos (talk) 00:32, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I couldn't figure out how to upload a smaller image, so I adjust the size on the page. You can play around with the dimensions to get your desired effect. Aoba47 (talk) 00:34, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

TFA
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:17, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I greatly appreciate this. Aoba47 (talk) 13:24, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 13:40, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Faces (Star Trek: Voyager)
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GA Cup Announcement
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DYK for List of songs recorded by Alyssa Milano
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Dark Angel (video game)
Hi Aoba47. Thanks so much for review at Max Guevara, I have just finished addressing the last of your concerns there. Please don't feel obligated as you've already done me a big favour, but just throwing it out there, if you're still in the mood for more Dark Angel I currently have the video game, Dark Angel (video game), also nominated at GAN. Normally I don't advertise my nominations but it has occurred to me that if both articles pass GAN within a week of each other I can nominated them together for a multiple DYK, something i've never done before. I'd be happy to review one of two of your nominations (be they PR, GAN, FAC or anything else) in return. If you don't have any nomination at present i'd be happy to owe you a favour in return for when you do. But if you're not interested, no worries at all. I have left a similar request for a review at Project Video games. Have a nice day. Freikorp (talk) 23:28, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
 * No worries, I can pick this up for review. I will have my comments up by the end of the week, if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 01:13, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks. :) Freikorp (talk) 01:32, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Anytime! Aoba47 (talk) 04:18, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Just so you know, I will be working on this slowly throughout the week, and will upload all of my comments at once if that is okay (I am attempting to balance my internship, and personal/creative writing with this so I am trying to be better with time management). If I do not upload my comments by the end of the week, please message me and let me know. I usually get back to GANs right away, so I apologize for the delay on my part. I enjoy reading the article so far (makes me want to work on the article about the Alias video game lol) Aoba47 (talk) 02:13, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
 * No worries, whenver you're ready is fine with me. :) Freikorp (talk) 08:43, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for passing the article. If you'd like a hand writing the Alias video game article, or anything else, just let me know. :) Freikorp (talk) 13:22, 27 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Will do :) Aoba47 (talk) 13:26, 27 October 2016 (UTC)

Hello again, I was wondering if you could help me with either my FAC for Love, Inc. (here) or my FLC for Shannen Doherty filmography (here). I understand that both of these items are outside of your area of interest, but I would greatly appreciate your input (it may be better actually to get feedback from an unfamiliar reader). I understand if you are unable to help with either, as it is a busy time of the year. I hope everything is going well for you. Thank you either way. Aoba47 (talk) 20:12, 14 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi Aoba47. No worries, i'll be happy to look at both of these nominations in the coming days. Coincidentally i've been meaning to put the final touches on Dark Angel (TV series) before nominating it for FAC and have just done that today: see nomination here. It's my first TV series nomination so i'm rather happy to look at someone else's for a bit of a comparison. Incidentally the double DYK hook from the two Dark Angel related articles you promoted is queued to appear on the front page tomorrow. :) Freikorp (talk) 01:17, 15 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your response! I would love to help with your FAC for Dark Angel (TV series). It would be really cool to get a better idea for myself too about the formatting/structure of a FA about a television show. Congrats with the DYK hook, and I think it is awesome that you are doing some much work for Dark Angel-related articles. I probably will not be able to comment on the FAC until the end of the work, as I am extremely busy. I apologize for the delay >< Aoba47 (talk) 04:00, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

Faces
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Twofingered Typist (talk) 13:29, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 13:50, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
 * You're very welcome - and for Madeline as well. Twofingered Typist (talk) 19:23, 26 October 2016 (UTC)

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Shannen Doherty filmography
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Twofingered Typist (talk) 13:37, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you as always! Aoba47 (talk) 16:24, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

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Madeline (video game series) update
My book arrived today and I've since taken every piece of usable information and placed it into the article. I think I need to take a break from this article for now. As my hard-working collaborator, would you kindly head over there and copyedit it in preparation for the Peer Review and GAN?--Coin945 (talk) 11:26, 3 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Awesome! I am glad to hear that everything worked out with the book. I can definitely go through the article and copyedit it. I will try to get to by the end of tomorrow. Thank you for the note. Aoba47 (talk) 13:35, 3 November 2016 (UTC)

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Your GA nomination of Lolita (Leah Labelle song)
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Trenyce
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The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Trenyce has been completed.

I hate drive-by taggers who don't explain why they have added a tag on an article's talk page. I'm assuming the unreliable source tag is because of The Smoking Gun citation so I did a quick search and found the same information on the TVGuide site and added it. If you think this was the issue then you should remove The Smoking Gun reference and the tag. You'll also notice a tag in the 2002-2003 American Idol section. You need to clarify who and why and cite it or just leave it out (it's not really germane to her story.

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Twofingered Typist (talk) 14:32, 12 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your help! The unreliable source tag was added actually because of the first source (Memphis Downtowner). I didn't realize it until it was pointed out to me by another user, but the source is written by Trenyce herself so the reliability of the source was called into question. Aoba47 (talk) 15:14, 12 November 2016 (UTC)
 * I see your problem. Still, it would be helpful if people noted their "issues" on the Talk page. This might be a useful citation some of the "problem" text. http://chicago.gopride.com/news/article.cfm/articleid/1980625 Good luck! Twofingered Typist (talk) 21:08, 12 November 2016 (UTC)
 * I will add a note about it to the Talk page to make it completely transparent. And that is a good idea. If I ever decide to come back to work on this article, I will definitely keep that in mind. Thank you for your help! :-) Aoba47 (talk) 21:16, 12 November 2016 (UTC)

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Your GA nomination of Sexify (Leah Labelle song)
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"Sexify"
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 * Thank you as always! Aoba47 (talk) 16:43, 22 November 2016 (UTC)

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