User talk:Aoi.nishino/Sistotrema brinkmannii/HelloSYK Peer Review

I think the article could be written better by moving some of the points to others places. Overall, the article has a very good information about the fungus, Sistotrema brinkmannii. Also it is good that it is neutral and you did not add any opinions. I think you should move points 2-4 from history and taxonomy section to Growth and Morphology section. Also, adding the unit of measurement next to numbers, like 4-5×2-2.5, would help the readers understand the size much more.

I see that you have referenced the article, Association of Pinus banksiana Lamb. and Populus tremuloides Michx. seedling fine roots with Sistotrema brinkmannii (Bres.) J. Erikss. (Basidiomycotina), which has a lot of information on the history and taxonomy of S.brinkmannii. By adding some information that was provided in this article you would be able to write more on history and taxonomy section.

This is an article on Sistotrema brinkmannii that I found:

Sistotrema brinkmannii, a psychrotolerant fungus from Antarctic soil http://forestpathology.cfans.umn.edu/pdf/Sistotrema.pdf '''This is an article that talks mainly about Sistotrema brinkmannii. It has few basic facts about the fungus that you can use in history and taxonomy and habitat sections. you might want to look at introduction and discussion parts of the article.''' HelloSYK (talk) 21:57, 1 November 2019 (UTC)