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Michael's Feedback on Akarsh's plan for article edits
Hey Akarsh,

I think you’ve chosen a great article to improve. The Wikipedia page for Effortfulness does not reflect its significance in the field of personality psychology – it seems to be a concept used in various applications and therefore should not be a stub. I think its a great idea to focus on its use in studying the development of children. From taking a quick look at your references, the predictive utility and generalizability of Effortfulness seems to be incredibly valuable as a personality characteristic for young children. Since you’ve already drafted some great edits to the introductory paragraph, you might consider briefly mentioning the use of Effortfulness in childhood development there, considering it will soon be a large part of the article.

I look forward to seeing your final edits to this article.

Michael Malek

Akarsh's response to Michael
Hi Michael,

Thanks so much for the response and I appreciate the support in editing this article. I will be sure to elaborate on the implications of effortfulness in childhood development. After doing some more research I noticed there are also studies on the influence of effortfulness across ages, therefore I will not limit my addition to just childhood but opt to expand the discussion to include more age categories.

Akarsh