User talk:Apiraksenarak

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– Fayenatic  L ondon 21:00, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Some advice for your draft page
Hi, I can't remember how I stumbled across your sandbox page – I was probably checking pages that linked to something else that I was updating.

No doubt you are finding it a useful exercise to practise creating a Wikipedia article. However, I'm not sure whether this would be accepted at the moment if you were to submit it for approval e.g. through WP:Articles for creation. Please consider the following:


 * Avoid writing in the first person – see MOS:OUR.
 * Expressions like "could be" and "may be" are WP:WEASEL words.
 * The "Accessories" section seems to unnecessarily use material that belongs in other articles, where a "See also" list of internal links would suffice.
 * I am not sure whether Healthline and similar websites are sufficiently WP:reliable sources.

By all means carry on with editing the page if you think it would be valid as a separate topic for Wikipedia. However, you might do better to consider adding some of the better material to the existing article Candle instead.

I hope this is helpful! – Fayenatic  L ondon 21:40, 22 November 2021 (UTC)


 * I moved your draft back to your sandbox. While it's possible to create a "scented candles" article, "scented candle :)" is not a valid page name. And remember, you're writing for an encyclopaedia, so make sure that your tone is as neutral as possible, and that everything you add to mainspace is supported by citations to reliable sources. Guettarda (talk) 18:56, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
 * It's disappointing that you ignored most of my advice above, and thought your draft was ready for publication. Let us know if you don't understand some of what I wrote, or the pages that I linked to.– Fayenatic  L ondon 23:28, 29 November 2021 (UTC)