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AmySue's Peer Review
One example of severe weather of these extreme weather conditions is extreme heat. Heat indirectly impacts human health causing psychological stress mental health issues as a result of physical health issues. The World Health Organization presents the fact that high extreme heat is directly related to certain ailments like cardiovascular disease, respiratory disease, and asthma. One piece of their evidence is that during summer 2003, Europe’s big heat wave, there were 70,000 recorded deaths related to the heat.[7] Heat exhaustion also occurs during extreme heat. As climate change continues, heat will continue to rise and these problems will exacerbate. Mental health fits into this because physical health and mental health are directly related.[8]

1. add additional citations 2. maybe add info about increasing heat in already hot regions 3. add info about disadvantaged populations being affected by heat stress

Greifaq (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

Web's peer review
-I would cite the second sentence. -I would cite the third sentence as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Webarnold (talk • contribs) 16:48, 27 February 2018 (UTC)