User talk:Appeasment/sandbox

peer review! very fun
We suggest more details on her education background and sample works of art. Would be cool to also include her date of birth, city (if not Doha) and her Arabic name too (as with customs in Wiki articles) Rayyan188 (talk) 11:21, 18 August 2022 (UTC)

peer review 2! very very fun
folks it seems like this sentence sounds like a praise: Not only did she work in Qatar but went on to promote art around the world - Greece, Iran, Tunisia, Kuwait, Egypt and Lebanon. Rayyan188 (talk) 11:26, 18 August 2022 (UTC)

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we'd add some more general information on her achievements in the first paragraph. In the career paragraph centence "Not only did she work in Qatar but went on to promote art around the world - Greece, Iran, Tunisia, Kuwait, Egypt and Lebanon." sounds like praising, so we would changing to more neutral tone. Discoloured04 (talk) 11:27, 18 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you guysss, We will try to work on your suggestions. hope you have a great day! working on changes rn. Bye .👍(❁´◡`❁) Appeasment (talk) 11:34, 18 August 2022 (UTC)